dilluns, 14 de gener del 2008

red flag

so here's I and my colloc aka the Other One/the_dark_side/the:intense:side discussing the whole writing thing. we've been sitting for an hour trying to type and we've managed a bit before we've strayed and we've started checking out mr jack kerouac and stuff in you!tube, there's something amazing in hearing His voice. anyways we've written some lines and corrected the structure in chapter 1 and chapeter last and now the Book looks more rounded and symmetric and circular and it makes me feel rather good but then the Other One tells Me:

the Book has outgrown Us.

and crap, It's right.

I'm somewhat darker and unforgiving, It's lighter and hopeful, and we both concluded that the writing has changed us both more than we've achieved with the words laid out. ergo, the Book's stronger and smarter than Us.

so we've come here to rant:
da-da-da.

but this is some rigurous ranting. that's why we publish, to at least write something fine:
and hell
da-da-da,
that's all we can think of.

the rest is the Book.

we'll try again.

1 comentari:

Gina ha dit...

"the rest is the Book." Well, that's far better than "The rest is silence" :p